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PostSubject: The Eternity Cat   Sat May 16, 2009 2:49 am

There was a clear, but cloudy night, when the straycat William went out for food. He knew that the rats were holding in the grass, visible at that time. So William went there and took some juicy rats and began to leave. Suddenly, another straycat appeared. William snap at the stranger, but realized that it was a female. William stopped up and watched her leave slowly. She didn't want to fight. William decided to talk to her. (Cat language)

After some few seconds, William appeared in front of the stray female. She backed up and started to run, when William said:
"Please, I wont hurt you".
The stray female turned the head slowly and looked into his eyes.
"God, he's beautiful", the stray female thought.
William stand there and watch her in very long time.
*So...", William began.
"What are you doing here? hunting rats?"
The stray female didn't answer. She looked down and then she said:
"I'm... I'm looking for males..."
William brighted up and said:
"Okey... what kind of personality do you want a males should have?"
"Nice, beautiful, watch for me..."
"That's what I am!", William thoght.
The female was very shy, so she didn't say much word. But after a few minutes, she looked into his eyes and said:
"W-would you like to... to be my mate?"
The female blushed and turned around very fast.
"Of course... you are so cute!", William said.
He was as blushed as she was, but he knew he forced to do it. I he didn't, they wouldn't come nowhere.
William knew that she was shy, but did what he must do. He started to lick her ears.
"W-what?!", the female said as a shock.
But the female liked it, so she liked back. Now the pair is loved in each other and after some days, they started to talk about cubs. The female felt ready and William were already that for a long time ago.

The time has gone, about 5 months, and they got 3 cubs. Their name would be:
* Nyana
* Chester
* Depher
The 3 cubs had just born. The female, Feline and William were the happiest parents ever. But they didn't know that something were strange about the cubs. And William himself...

To be continue...

So, what do you guys think about the story so far? Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Sun May 17, 2009 12:42 am

its very interesting
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Sun May 17, 2009 3:38 am

Thanks, dude.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Sun May 17, 2009 10:04 am

i have readed it in ccX stil i don't have any problem in reading it agian Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Sun May 17, 2009 3:59 pm

Haha, thanks! I continue when I feel for it... I'm sick and have no content... Sad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Mon May 18, 2009 11:40 am

hey did your cold leaved you nm
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Mon May 18, 2009 3:47 pm

No... still there... Sad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Tue May 19, 2009 1:32 am

ohh to bad SadSadSadSadSadSadSadSad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Tue May 19, 2009 9:34 am

that's to bad Sad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Tue May 19, 2009 1:56 pm

hey nm pls post the rest of the part pls dude
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Tue May 19, 2009 3:42 pm

yes plz.........
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Tue May 19, 2009 8:25 pm

Okey, this is the continue of "The Eternity Cat".

After a few minutes, Feline notice something strange about the cubs. They got too big paws and claws.
"Why do they got too big paws and claws?", Feline asked.
"You didn't realized that I'm not a normal cat", William answered.
"W-what about you?! What are you then?!"; Feline said and become worried.
"I looks like a complete normal cat, but I am and has always been a cheetah", William said..
"T-that.... that's not true!", Feline cried tedious.
William wont loose Feline like he loosed his previous he got before. So William tried to talk calm with her.
"Please... forgive me. I'm sorry that I didn't told you. But I love you so much. I wont loose you. please, love me for who I am.", William said.
Feline where uncertian. She didn't know, but she loved William so much, so she tried to think about his appaerance.
"Okey... I will try to take care if this situation.", Feline said.
She was so scared about that horible news, but woudln't leave William for who he was.

After a few seconds, one of the cubs wanted some milk from Feline. He tried so much to get the teat, but Feline tried to get away from it. She where so scared for their claws and teeths. The teeths where more special than normal cat.
"You have to feed your cubs, or they will die, honey", William said.
Feline didn't want them to die, so she tried to stand out the pain... but there wasn't a pain she thought. Feline lie down and all the cubs came for milk.

Now it has taken 10 months and the cubs are big enough to hunt and leave their mother. But they wanted to stay to protect their parent they have lived in so many years with. William and Feline tried so much te get them leave, but they didn't want to. If they would leave, they where only out for hunt.
One of the cubs came home with a big antelope. They had scratch the antelope to death. They got the Cheetah within theirself...

Feline were sitting alone in the dark den where they lived. She heard many sound around. Frogss were quack, the antelopes were doing their sound... Feline couldn't sleep. She was thinking about the situation. Should she stay or leave? This situation were too big for her..
William heard that she were awake. He walked to her..
"Hey, don't think about it. It's not too danger, okey?"
"No, I guess it isn't", Feline aswered.

Days went and the cubs were still growing... and still with their parents. Feline wasn't happy. She couldn't think about anything else than the situation which changed her life.
Manye would say that this is a little thing to think about, bur for her, It's destoyed her life. She met a beautiful cat, but he wasn't a normal cat... a strange cheetah.

Feline were sitting alone at the top of a hill. She were thinking and thinking.
"What am I supposed to do?", Feline thought.
Feline ponder and ponder.
After a few seconds, she heard a noise. She wanted to check it out.
She cam closer and closer... now she saw what is was... it was antelope, who knocked it's head into a wall... there was a cabin in the middle of their territory.
Looks like the antelope knew what he was doing. Something should be in there.
The antelope didn't care about Feline. It wasn't think about to be killed. It still knock it's head into the wall.
Feline tried to check it out, but it was too late... a shot were fired. There was a human in that cabin... but why did the antelope knocked it's head into the wall? Did the human make a noise with it?
Anyway... now, Feline is hurt. She try to stand up.. but she was too weak. If just William were here...

After a few minutes, the antelope were shot too. The human strode out and walked to Feline.
"No! It's too late", Feline thought... but it wasn't.
"ROAAAAAAAR!"
There he was! It was William and the cubs! There are here to help me!
William attacked the human and one of the cubs took his gun and broked it.
"God, please help me to get oiut of here!", Feline said.
"Yes, of course! I'll never leave you out here!"; William answered.

Now the human is dead and Feline is safe at home.
"I'll never go out by myself for now. I love you all! Thank you for saving me", Feline said.
"Of course. We were worried about you", William answered.
"Now, please take a rest. See you tomorrow", William said and they all slept.

To be continue...

I know... this was a very bad story...
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 2:42 am

ya very depressing
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 9:01 am

yup agree with comeon dudes still i like this story............. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 4:13 pm

Sounds good..... bad that I got a much better but in Swedish Sad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 4:38 pm

ohh to bad
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 6:05 pm

yo transleted it .........
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Wed May 20, 2009 6:23 pm

Translate?!?!? Are you crazy?!?! Shocked It's about 4-5 pages in a book!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Thu May 21, 2009 1:25 am

hey pls send me the continusasion of the story it is a very good story
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Thu May 21, 2009 2:20 am

You mean the continue of the story???
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Thu May 21, 2009 2:34 am

yup dude continue it
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Thu May 21, 2009 3:18 am

Yes, let's see when I continue...
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Thu May 21, 2009 9:07 am

ok waiting...........
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Mon May 25, 2009 7:53 pm

ya mee too
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PostSubject: Re: The Eternity Cat   Mon May 25, 2009 9:59 pm

Sorry, I don't have time or lust for it now... maybe it ends now... never continue... :/
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