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| Subject: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| Hi guys this is my first fan-fic.This story is written by me.Its related to dragon balls.Enjoy reading.
EPISODE 1 : THE ADVENTURE BEGINS
In the deep reaches of space there existed a planet named vegeta. The planet was advanced and the saiyans were very powerful.Goku was also a powerful saiyan and was ruthless like other saiyans.Their king was Vegeta (Our Vegeta) who was a super saiyan.The saiyans were evil and constantly made invasions and captured them. Vegeta killed King Cold Frieza's Dad because he was killing many saiyans.So frieza wanted to have revenge and he also knew that he was no match for him.In days spending memories of his father cooler also became angry.So they decided to work together and take revenge. On one such day Vegeta,along with other saiyans Goku,Bardock,Broly,and Turles went to a planet to capture it. But they didn't notice frieza and Frieza noticed it.So Fireza went to planet Vegeta in his absence.Vegeta had gone to planet M2 to capture it and was succesful in doing so. It was a hard job so the group decided to rest on that planet for a day.Meanwhile Frieza thought that in absence of vegeta he must destroy the planet.In this story cooler is 3 times powerful as frieza's 4th form.So they both destroyed Planet Vegeta.Goku's brother Razmit escaped somehow and reached planet M2 and informed Vegeta that Cooler and Frieza destroyed their home planet .The group was very shcoked to hear this.Vegeta said that frieza is a monster who is scared and took advantage of his abasence and destroyed the planet vegeta.The planet Vegeta also had its own dragonballs which were destroyed along with the planet.But Vegeta also knew that he took cooler's help so he was very powerful and even a super saiyan was no match for him. So vegeta did not attack immediately. So the adventure begins. For further adventures and see what the group is gonna do now be sure to see the next episode of Dragonball Destiny of The Saiyans! | |
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| Subject: cool Sun Jan 11, 2009 10:11 pm | |
| but i know this | |
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DarkPrince Founder
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Tue Jan 13, 2009 12:15 am | |
| Prajwal I know but others do not know
EPISODE 2 : FRIEZA'S FEARED
The episode begins with the scene with frieza destroying Planet Vegeta and Razmit coming and informing Vegeta and others about it. Vegeta and others become shocked and become sad that the whole saiyan race was destroyed.They all go and see what happened but find nothing other than dust of the planet vegeta floating in vacuum of the space and a spaceship flying away with laughing voices of frieza and cooler.Vegeta get's angry and turns into super saiyan and shouts "FRIEZA, I SWEAR I WILL AVENGE THE DEATH OF THE WHOLE SAIYAN RACE!!!!!" Goku says that the dragonballs are also destroyed so there is no chance of reviving the planet. Meanwhile Frieza and Cooler are celebrating over the victory of devastating of Planet Vegeta. Frieza says that with cooler and his combined strength their is no chance that even a super saiyan can defeat them.But still cooler thinks that saiyans power increases after recovering from seious injuries so they can become very powerful.So he suggested to frieza that he should find the remaining saiyans and exterminate them also. Frieza agrees and sends one of his powerful minions to find the group of saiyans. He is also an alien named Zamelot to kill them.He is also strong . He is just a little bit weaker than frieza. While Evil Zamelot continues to search for the group.Goku and his brother are training on planet M2 as they all have decided to search for frieza after 6 hours. Vegeta notices that goku has grown very powerful since he ever met him. Goku and Razmit finish their training and then join the other saiyans. Zamelot continues searching destroying each planet in its way after searching it. The group was resting so that they may be ready for any battle that comes in its way. There was nothing to do for them in the planet ruined by them.Vegeta realizes that how ruthless he was that he destroyed the planet.He thinks"There is no difference between me and frieza.Just as he destroyed my planet I also destroyed this planet's people same way." But then vegeta stops thinking and says that saiyans are like that only. Then suddenly the planet starts shaking and in a very fast speed a creature comes in there way. Its Zamelot Zamelot says "Hello Vegeta Frieza has sent me to kill you as you saiyans are very powerful and you might pose a threat to him and cooler too" Vegeta says "Oh and what makes you think that you can kill me!?Sorry bud you have come to the wrong place you have come if you don't wanna die.But if yes then be my guest I im ready" zamelot" Don't worry vegeta Im just strong as frieza with amazing speed so I'll give you a good fight" The others saiyans also say" We are with you Prince Vegeta!" Then everyone power up and vegeta turns into SSJ. Vegeta says "So you do still think that you are a match against all of us? Hehehe you have got some nerve meddling with the prince of all saiyans" Then they all start fighting with explosive powers
Now the 3rd episode will too come soon! Be sure to see as one more character's gonna come! | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:24 pm | |
| [wow]Ok I will send more episodes soon[/wow] | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:48 pm | |
| Nice story ^.^ I liked it a lot | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Tue Feb 17, 2009 5:20 pm | |
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| Subject: how Tue Feb 17, 2009 7:11 pm | |
| how you create that thing | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:42 pm | |
| ya i also like that thing dude | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:36 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:38 am | |
| & dp! listen goku's brother isn't Razmit! he's Raditz! sory if it was ur own caracter! | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:56 pm | |
| - DarkPrince wrote:
- Prajwal I know but others do not know
EPISODE 2 : FRIEZA'S FEARED
The episode begins with the scene with frieza destroying Planet Vegeta and Razmit coming and informing Vegeta and others about it. Vegeta and others become shocked and become sad that the whole saiyan race was destroyed.They all go and see what happened but find nothing other than dust of the planet vegeta floating in vacuum of the space and a spaceship flying away with laughing voices of frieza and cooler.Vegeta get's angry and turns into super saiyan and shouts "FRIEZA, I SWEAR I WILL AVENGE THE DEATH OF THE WHOLE SAIYAN RACE!!!!!" Goku says that the dragonballs are also destroyed so there is no chance of reviving the planet. Meanwhile Frieza and Cooler are celebrating over the victory of devastating of Planet Vegeta. Frieza says that with cooler and his combined strength their is no chance that even a super saiyan can defeat them.But still cooler thinks that saiyans power increases after recovering from seious injuries so they can become very powerful.So he suggested to frieza that he should find the remaining saiyans and exterminate them also. Frieza agrees and sends one of his powerful minions to find the group of saiyans. He is also an alien named Zamelot to kill them.He is also strong . He is just a little bit weaker than frieza. While Evil Zamelot continues to search for the group.Goku and his brother are training on planet M2 as they all have decided to search for frieza after 6 hours. Vegeta notices that goku has grown very powerful since he ever met him. Goku and Razmit finish their training and then join the other saiyans. Zamelot continues searching destroying each planet in its way after searching it. The group was resting so that they may be ready for any battle that comes in its way. There was nothing to do for them in the planet ruined by them.Vegeta realizes that how ruthless he was that he destroyed the planet.He thinks"There is no difference between me and frieza.Just as he destroyed my planet I also destroyed this planet's people same way." But then vegeta stops thinking and says that saiyans are like that only. Then suddenly the planet starts shaking and in a very fast speed a creature comes in there way. Its Zamelot Zamelot says "Hello Vegeta Frieza has sent me to kill you as you saiyans are very powerful and you might pose a threat to him and cooler too" Vegeta says "Oh and what makes you think that you can kill me!?Sorry bud you have come to the wrong place you have come if you don't wanna die.But if yes then be my guest I im ready" zamelot" Don't worry vegeta Im just strong as frieza with amazing speed so I'll give you a good fight" The others saiyans also say" We are with you Prince Vegeta!" Then everyone power up and vegeta turns into SSJ. Vegeta says "So you do still think that you are a match against all of us? Hehehe you have got some nerve meddling with the prince of all saiyans" Then they all start fighting with explosive powers
Now the 3rd episode will too come soon! Be sure to see as one more character's gonna come! i also was not knowing this dude | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:03 pm | |
| it is a fan friction in it he's making the story own!! how could u would have heared of it? | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:10 pm | |
| EPISODE 3 : A NEW FACE
The scene focuses on Planet M2 where the evil creature named Zamelot sent by frieza to destroy Vegeta and rest of his friends was there. They stare at each other for 5 seconds then they start fighting with explosive powers. The battle shakes the whole ruined planet.Zamelot attacks Turles and then throws him on the ground very hard and his head is damaged.Bardock gets angry and throws his Power Attack on Zamelot but he eats it and increases his powers.Vegeta then says " Don't attack him with your energy guys.Only fighting with bare hands will effect him" Goku says "That's right Vegeta let's do it" Vegeta charges his muscles.Meanwhile Goku and Razmit perform there team attack that they ave been practicing for long. They charged towards zamelot and then dissapeared and punched him from bith sides and then kicked him down from above. Then Zamelot gets up and Goku and Razmit agan attack but this time he holds both of their legs and then bang them into each other. Vegeta comes and gives him a Mach Punch.But he doges it and then attacks him with his Spear Blizzard attack and knocks off vegeta to ground only Bardock is left who is not injured.But Vegeta comes again. Zamelot says"This time you won't get away from me alive Vegeta" Vegeta becomes mad and he and bardock start attacking him. But that doesnt affect Zamelot. Then Zamelot charges his Death Beam attack whom he learnt form Frieza and then attack Vegeta with it.Vegeta doges and Zamelot uses Super Speed and Punches Vegeta hard on his stomach Vegeta shouts "AAAARRRGGGHHHH!!!!!!!" Zamelot says "Hahaha you are even no match for me then how can you even think of defeating master Frieza and Cooler.I must say you saiyans are very brave. Now time to kill this saiyan whom his friends called Bardock" He charges Death beam and then attacks. But then in a blinding flash of light someone come and throws it away. Injured Vegeta asks "Who..who are you?" The stranger says "King Vegeta Im your friend Broly!" Bardock exclaims "Broly?! But we thought you were dead.We heard that you went to a planet to capture it but became dead as the planet was destroyed?" Broly says "No Bardock its not true . It was Frieza's evil work . Frieza destroyed hat planet.I somehow manged to escape but I was nearly dead.I went to capture that planet but Frieza's minions attacked me on the way.The inhabitants of the planet were so kind that they healed me back to health so I decided not to invade this planet and I started to like that planet .But frieza saw that I was a strong saiyan who was on the edge to become a Super Saiyan.So frieza destroyed that planet so I may also be killed.But I escaped.FFRRRRIIIIEEEZAA!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!" Broly's muscles expand and his hair turns Greenish Yellow.He becomes an Ascended Super Saiyan. Vegeta eyes are wide open.He says "You are al....also..a super sai..sa..saiyan?" Broly tells "I liked the inhabitants of the planet so much that their death made me angry I remembered their love and care and then I became an super saiyan! I came to know of planet vegeta's destruction so it made me more angry that frieza is doing so much bad work and I became an ascended super saiyan." Zamelot says "Super saiyan or not Im going to crush you as you saiyans will always be weaklings" They both start battling then. Don't forget to read the next episode too! | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:48 pm | |
| i did'nt knowed this !!!! when you will post more | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:33 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:26 pm | |
| cool! & dp Goku's brother isn't Ramzit! he's Raditz! | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:39 pm | |
| I know that fred...This is another story | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:41 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:46 pm | |
| EPISODE 4 : ADVANCING TO VICTORY!
After Broly explained everything he powers up and becomes and ascended super saiyan i.e. Ultra Super Saiya-Jin.Vegeta becomes shocked and thinks that "How has he become more powerful last time I saw him battling he battled like a Pipesquek but now he is like a hero! He is too confident" The battle was about to start but then Bardock says "Hey Broly don't use energy attacks on him.He might increase his power by absorbing it" Broly says "Hey Bardock thanks for the suggestion!" zamelot thinks "Why is this saiyan scaring me is he really very powerful?" Broly knows that he is an alien of Zoronk species so he cannot handle much power. So broly decides to toy with him a little while. Zamelot attacks him with his Spear Blizzard attack but broly catches it and throws it away.Then they both start fighting with great intensity.In the end Zamelot gives Broly a hard punch.Broly laughs out "Forgive me if I don't tremble in fear .Don't tell me that is this all you can do.I know your weakness from beginning" Zamelot says"You mean yo...you mean you were just toying around ?" Zamelot thinks that now broly can defeat him with his physical strength and he starts to run away but then Broly charges his green energy attack and then throws at Zamelot. Zamelot laughs and turns back to absorb it. But broly is filling it up with much energy and Zamelot is absorbing so much energy that he can't handle. Broly stops throwing his gree energy waves.As the energy by Broly was too much so Zamelot was taking time to absorb it completely.Then Broly whispers "Yes! This is it he is off guard!!!"Broly flies fastly towards Zamelot saying "Times up my friend!!!SAY GOODBYE!!" Broly Punches through zamelot...with a hole in his stomach (lol) As he hasn't fully absorbed the energy.So that causes him to blast. So he blasted with energy and then he dies. Bardock congratulated him. And then Broly took all his saiyan friends to a nearby planet to heal them. Don't forget to miss the next episode I have almost compeleted it and its very interesting! | |
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| Subject: Re: Dragon Ball Z:Destiny Of the Saiyans Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:21 pm | |
| wow man it's getting more interesting! | |
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